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The arrest of Sorchei

VirginieCarquin

Published: Jun 16, 2012

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Description

This is an illustration of the arrest of Sorchei, an epic battle on shores of the river Malkur.

PS : Sorchei isn't human, it is part of an SF novel I write.

I submit this deviation in the contest [link]

Image size

2362x1192px 875.8 KB

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Zazill

Oct 5, 2012

Overall

Vision

Originality

Technique

Impact

Fighting someone who holds a gun with a short blade is totally badass, I really like the fact that your protagonist is a female.
THE GOOD:
The dynamic is amazing, the scene is busy but not overcrowded and the flow throughout is solid.
The protagonist looks believable and skilled.
The piece is also clear, in other words I can tell what is going on at first glance

THE NOT GOOD
I don't like the mountain at all. Its too detailed and I think that it limits the scale of the entire scene.

All in all its very good and I feel inspired